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This feeling
Over runs my body
Shuts everything down
All i think about is you

I discover the truth
So painful
So much emotion
A little too much to be able to deal with

Getting to know you was a big thing
Gaining the crush was another
You changed my whole way of thinking
You seemed like 'the one'
You were kind
Funny
So nice to me
You had this charm i couldn't understand

But then i had this feeling
Something wasn't right
That moment i found out
You had a girlfriend
Seemed to stop everything
My world just fell around me
stood still

All i could do was stare into the distance
As tears began to flood my eyes
'Not here
Not now
Wait Zoe
Wait!'
I recall what i told myself
wait untill ill i was alone to dwell on my feelings

It got to that point later on
I sat down
And there we have it
Everything opened up
Like a dam
The tears flooded down my face
It was never ending
I felt so much for you
And you didn't with me
Story of my life

I later realised
He had his girlfriend all along
He never told me
Even though on two accounts i told him how i felt
The real deep stuff

And he kinda ignored it
It made me think
Why?

When i see him around i get this feeling
Pain inside me
I begin to well up
Realise
I never had a chance
As we pass each other
I bow my head in shame as you casually ignore me

I feel stupid
Angry i let myself get like this
Why do this to myself?
Fall so deep into the trap of "love" that i cant escape?

I cant stop myself
I feel sick to the stomach
I changed for you
I've abused myself for you to notice
What for?
Nothing..
It just proves you shouldn't  change yourself for anyone

Now i'm on this road of recovery
From my feelings of you....
So this is a little something I just wrote, I'm kinda going through a tough time atm and I needed to express myself.this poem isn't very good but yeah I've not really had much creative ness recently.. So yeah
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NiCHaNsU14 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this was really beautiful!!!:iconcryingplz: STAY STRONG!!!:iconilovekrissiplz: C=
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Zoey113 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
Awh, thank you so much :hug: ill try
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NiCHaNsU14 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
teehee!!! your welcome!!!:iconarmstrongtighthugplz: nd don't wrry gurl!!! i know u will!!!:icongreatjobplz: haha :icononionxdplz::icondaawplz: C=
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choco-latte-squirrel Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
You make such good poetry!
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:iconzoey113:
Zoey113 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
Awh,I didn't think it was that good :/ but thank you :hug:
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choco-latte-squirrel Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Welcome. I thought it was, I really wanna read more of yours.
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:iconzoey113:
Zoey113 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013
Thank you, and my works not that good :/
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:iconchoco-latte-squirrel:
choco-latte-squirrel Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I think they are. I just need to see more.
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:iconzoey113:
Zoey113 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013
Awh,you checked my gallery?
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:iconchoco-latte-squirrel:
choco-latte-squirrel Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I will check out your gallery. :)
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Zoey113 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
:3 thank you
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Toahydronman Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
(claps)
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Zoey113 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
?? whats that suppost to mean
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Toahydronman Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
it was a good peice of work
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Zoey113 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
Oh, sorry. I'm just kinda getting a lot of stick for my work so wasn't sure if it was a positive/ negative comment
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Toahydronman Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
not a problem... ^-^
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dementedgoth Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i can really connect to your poem the words really flow off the page!
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Zoey113 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
Awh :hug:
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Eveei Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's beautiful qq really really beautiful qq hang in there hun qq I know totally how you feel since I'm goig through something like that too.. hang in there <3 it will all be ok <3 :3
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Zoey113 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
Thank you Hun :) means a lot, ill try hang in there :)
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MarianaErwin555 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013
~Zoey113, this is one good poem for a goodbye to someone. :D
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:iconzoey113:
Zoey113 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
Awh thank you :hug: I have actually wrote something, well sora a letter, to say goodbye to the person but I can't bring myself to send it
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MarianaErwin555 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
Wow. Hope you make more. :D
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:iconzoey113:
Zoey113 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
thank you and no doubt ill add more poetry soon
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MarianaErwin555 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013
You are welcome. :D
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its4ever24 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013
You should definitely give yourself more credit. It is good; the emotions flow together nicely and people can relate to the way that you feel. Keep your head up and never change for anyone but yourself.
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Zoey113 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
Awh thank you :hug: I'm not feeling very creative at the moment so I didn't think I flowed well
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its4ever24 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
You're welcome :happybounce:
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:iconagirlwhopassesasaboy:
hang in there, it'll be alright *hugs*
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:iconzoey113:
Zoey113 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
Thank you sweetie :hug:
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Amaris123 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this, I don't think you should have to change for anyone. :hug: :heart:
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:iconzoey113:
Zoey113 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
Awh, but that's how I feel, I changed a lot of things so this lad would notice me :( :hug:
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Amaris123 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I know that's what happened and all, but I think that you should be who YOU want to be, the right person will come to you. :)
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Zoey113 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
:hug: why can't there be more nice people like you
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Amaris123 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehe, thank you, hun. :huggle: Sometimes I wonder the same thing.
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Zoey113 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013
:hug:
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anthonylino Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Awesome work.
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:iconzoey113:
Zoey113 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
Thank you
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MandyB82 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013
This is great! :D
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:iconzoey113:
Zoey113 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
Thank you
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MandyB82 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
You're welcome :huggle:
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DeadSkarlett Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013
Good work
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Zoey113 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
Thank you
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DeadSkarlett Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
yw
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chemicalkid101 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student General Artist
It is good, the words flow so easily, give yourself more credit :)
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